Showing posts with label Audience Feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Audience Feedback. Show all posts

Thursday, 8 December 2011

Feedback for my finished poster

In class, we showed each other the ancillary tasks we had finished and gave each other feedback on what did and didn't work. I was pleased with the feedback I got as my classmates were able to identify the genre of my track and were able to understand why I created a poster with very little detail. Some of the comments I got were:

"I like the continuity of the red with the stars at the top and the record label at the bottom, it works well" Alice
"The space in the middle is good, it demonstrates a rule of thirds and constructs a heavy feel" Emma
"I can see that it is alternative rock" Isaac

Thursday, 3 November 2011

Feedback Followup

After getting feedback from my peers about the look of my actor yesterday, I decided to modify his clothing colours to see how the darker clothing would look. Instead of hunting down my performer to do another shoot in different, darker clothes, I decided to do a quick colour edit of his hair and his clothing on adobe photoshop and this is what I came up with...

Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Feedback

I had some feedback from my classmates on what clothing they picture on my actor as the casual chinos and white polo top is not working! When intentionally listening to the voice of the singer and imagining who I could picture singing it, I came up with Professor Snape from Harry Potter. I think this might be due to the 'whiney' effect of the singers voice. From this, I imagined dark, skinny clothing and dark hair.

My classmates agreed with this. Alice said she saw the actor with ginger hair and wearing no shoes. This is a very individual look which would probably work, however I do not think my performer would be willing to dye his hair and therefore I will need to compromise. I like the idea of no shoes as this is very different and 'indie'. Emma, another classmate of mine saw a bold character wearing a checked shirt with the top button done up. Although this is also an individual look, I didn't think this worked too well-I did not like the 'bold' idea. I also got feedback from my teacher who said that he thinks the character should be 'messy and dirty' and wear plain, dark clothes. I agree with this, the cream chinos and white polo top is very 'boy band' and clean and does not match the voice of the singer. This became evident to my teacher when he saw the photo shoot that I had done with Ed.

Photo shoot- I also got feedback from my teacher about the angles and poses in my photo shoot. I was happy with my photos as I thought they showed the subdued mood produced by the track and I was glad that my teacher agreed.

Song and artist name- I was undecided on what names to use for the track and artist and therefore asked a few people what they thought. I will put the results into a table and post it onto my blog. Getting other people's opinions really helps me decide when I like more than one idea!

Monday, 26 September 2011

Audience Feedback

During class time, my classmates and I shared the ideas we had come up with regarding our different song choices and what we were thinking of including in our music videos.
I used my blog to explain and show the mental processes that I had thought of to include in my video (or at least the general theme). I explained in as much detail as possible, stating what colour choices I was going for and the general feel I wanted my music video to give.
Many of my classmates agreed with the route I was taking, however I didn't have a set story line in my head that I was able to share and therefore, my peers suggested a couple of things to me. These were very closely linked with the hazy thoughts I had which included the nightmare shots and the slow, glum shots to suit the music almost portraying the unhappiness in someone's life (initially a man).
The idea my audience came up with was a story line including a troubled man who had lost his way in life or lost the one he loves etc. This has inspired me and I now have another thread into my coursework to research and include in my planning and ideas.
I found sharing my ideas with others was very helpful as I was able to get the opinions from fresh eyes of what their immediate thoughts were when listening to the music. Therefore, I will continue to collect audience feedback throughout my planning and producing of my music video.